Kia Ora bloggers! This term for literacy our focus have been "Persuasive writing" so I deiced to do it about "Why our Morning tea should be longer". ENJOY!
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 24, 2021
Why our MT should be longer!
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Hi Flynn,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this blog post and I agree that our morning tea should be longer! Good work :)
Bye!
Kia ora my name is James from Mangapapa School. I like how you told us how to make the plane fly faster. How did you know that a plane flies faster when you
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nice work flynn and I thnik the same thing
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